Question

I need your help to fix grammar. Would you please fix my grammar? I would appreciate.

The reason why the Mountain Pass mine in the United States stopped production of rare earths in 2002 is due to environmental pollution, but China continues to mine rare earths because rare earths can become a resource weapon. Rare earths, such as Dysprosium Neodymium Ratan terbium Samarium Rare minerals are chemically stable and dominant in heat transfer is a key resource for high-tech industrial products, especially smartphones. China has rare-earth elements if there is oil in the Middle East. The resources have much impact on industry and diplomacy around the world. In fact, when China had a conflict with Japan over the Senkaku archipelago in 2010, rare earths stopped exporting to Japan, and Japan gave up the fight in three days. Also, the resources have enough power powerful in the trade war with the United States. The United States relies on 30 percent import of the resources from China.

Answer 1

The reason why the Mountain Pass mine in the United States stopped production of rare earth in 2002 is due to environmental pollution, but China continues to mine rare earth because rare earth can become a resource weapon. Rare earth, such as Dysprosium Neodymium Ratan terbium Samarium Rare minerals are chemically stable and dominant in heat transfer is a key resource for high-tech industrial products, especially smartphones. China has rare-earth elements if there is oil in the Middle East. The resources have much impact on industry and diplomacy around the world. In fact, when China had a conflict with Japan over the Senkaku archipelago in 2010, rare earth stopped exporting to Japan, and Japan gave up the fight in three days. Also, the resources have enough power powerful in the trade war with the United States. The United States relies on a 30 percent import of the resources from China.

[ There were as such no grammatical errors except 'earths', it should be earth. In the last line of the paragraph, it should be 'a 30 percent', I have corrected it. Rest your paragraph was perfect.]