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Is this paragraph correct.

Social structure starts with presentation and means of advancing in favor of the factors that surround you. Social structure depends on the amount of involvement with and acceptance from others around. How we behave and feel are important variants of others approval that validates our place in social structure. Beliefs and habits enforced by family, which can be part of culture, set boundaries for social structures that may or may not be considered acceptable to be a part of.

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Ans. Yes , the paragraph is completely correct but I would suggest you to begin the paragraph with a one liner meaning of Social Structure , you can add " Social Structures refers to the agreement in the society which involves the interaction of a human with the other social elements or institutions of the society " . You can end this paragraph with a conclusion of social Structure , like how social Structure helps us.

Rest assured , the paragraph is correct.

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