Question

Is my writing for this email is correct?

I mean academy and grammar. (you can edit and add any sentence)

Dear sir/madam,

UK Visas and Immigration

Greetings!

I hope you are doing great!

I am Omar Saleh. I got a British visa (Tier-4) on 18 Feb 2020. According to the visa I obtained, I should have to enter UK during the period from 21 Feb 2020 to 20 Mar 2020 but Unfortunately, I couldn't to enter UK in this period because of the preventive measures that my country has taken to avoid the spread of Corona-virus (Covid-19) to suspend all the international flights for a period from March 16, 2020 to Apr 29, 2020.

I would really appreciate it if you help me in my problem.

Thanks, and Best Regards

Omar

Answer 1

There are some grammatical errors. I am editing it.

Dear sir/madam,

UK Visas and Immigration

Greetings!

I hope you are doing great!

I am Omar Saleh. I got a British visa (Tier-4) on 18 Feb 2020.This visa made be eligible to visit UK during the period 21 Feb 2020 to 20 Mar 2020 but unfortunately I couldn't enter UK during this period because of the preventive measures taken by my country to avoid the spread of Corona-virus (Covid-19). All the international flights were suspended from March 16, 2020 to Apr 29, 2020.

Pease provide me new visa as soon as possible so that I can visit UK.

I shall really appreciate it if you can help me in this regard.

Thanks, and Best Regards

Omar